flame862's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dual Mouse: Eyecandy]

Great!

I thought the graphics were MUCH better than the graphics in the first version. I suggest easing the movement of the blocks so they don't just float so "boringly" in one speed. Get some effects like shaking screens! YESSS.

[Bubble Tanks 2]

Amazing design

The design is amazing! Graphics could have been a bit better but no matter.

I thought this was just another boring top down shooter but it turned out it wasn't. Simple gameplay but tons of features. I'll say it again: the design is amazing!

[Speedball 2]

Great idea. Good potential

It's certainly a great idea. You might want to put more features in such as...

Walls
Scrolling maps
Enemies
Springs

I just said a bunch of random words...it's up to you to make them work. ^^
Make the buttons in the main menu go out faster too.

For fixing the music that's playing multiple times, I bet you're starting the song at the main menu. Instead, make a frame right after the preloader that leads to the main menu and place the song there. Then, it won't place it over and over.

pukenator11 responds:

wow thanks for the ideas. I relly needed ideas for something to do over the easter holidays in a couple of weeks so watch out for speedball 3

[Age of War]

Nice

Add a save function.

and don't let the ion cannon from damaging the other base
unless you did that on purpose. Seems really cheap though.

[Blocky (REALLY FUN!!!)]

simple game, yet fun

found it easier just to hold down the space bar.

anyways. it's great, maybe enhance the graphics a bit instead of just blocks.

also maybe you can add some moving targets or "water"

[Monster munchies]

augh

it's like one of my games, the -TANKS- one...
but you've got a halloween themed cartoon one.
i used more a more tech style

i also have a bit more variety...with different maps and obstacles.
it got a score of 3.5...maybe getting it sponsored would've helped.
too late, i didn't know about sponsorships anyways.

ok, about thIS game...there should be more variety. I like the idea with the candy though.

[Gravity Vortex]

really needs improvement.

it's a good start. but it's only a start

what would be great is...no charging bar. and they could change gravity in midair.
and graphics do need more attention.

upgrades would be great. ones that speed everything up. others that slow everything down. more that:
strengthen the gravity field.
lessen the gravity
protects you from certain color obstacles
lets you fire at certain obstacles.

there are tons of ideas.
if you don't feel like it...i'd be glad to finish it. it's an awesome idea!

[Find teh Pumpkin]

haha, surprisingly amusing

too little levels. i beat it in 30 secs...
and it was too easy in that once your mouse went over it, it turned into a hand.
you should make the pumpkin a simple movieclip and use the following code:

onMouseDown = function(){
if(pumpkin.hitTest(_xmouse, _ymouse){
//go to the next level
}
}

that way, the mouse won't turn into a hand, giving it away...
i like the graphics though.
cartoonish style.

you should've done more levels and submitted it on halloween.

blanblan responds:

Thanks for that little tip thing. :)

I'll be sure to fix it.

I submitted it a week or so earlier, what's the difference? xD

[Sik Triple S]

awfully overused

no sound?! bg music and sFX are needed...

you should have continued this and made it a completely game with:

more enemies.
more weapons, not just nukes. rockets, guided missiles, timed detonators.
more upgrades, speed, shield, health, rate of fire, overheating temperature...

[bubblers-bubble game v1.1]

complex programming? uh...iono about that...

add some soft background music
make other kinds of bubbles you can pick up.
small ones...big ones...medium sized ones...
and not only can you just have a bubble that slows down time...
you could have one that's a temporary invincibility thing.
another that gives you another life...

tons of things.

you should have also made the fish do something too.
and maybe a time limit to show how much time till you get to the surface, or the next level where you would see a new kind of fish or bubble.

when i make stuff...i try to add tons of variety.

you'll notice the amount of weapons you can pick from in SS2...the obstacles in Tanks...

Spectacle responds:

I'll do the good stuff in my main games. This was just the first proper game I made. I made it ages ago. I can do alot now and I'll be submitting more soon.