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[Speedball 2]

Great idea. Good potential

It's certainly a great idea. You might want to put more features in such as...

Walls
Scrolling maps
Enemies
Springs

I just said a bunch of random words...it's up to you to make them work. ^^
Make the buttons in the main menu go out faster too.

For fixing the music that's playing multiple times, I bet you're starting the song at the main menu. Instead, make a frame right after the preloader that leads to the main menu and place the song there. Then, it won't place it over and over.

pukenator11 responds:

wow thanks for the ideas. I relly needed ideas for something to do over the easter holidays in a couple of weeks so watch out for speedball 3

[Find teh Pumpkin]

haha, surprisingly amusing

too little levels. i beat it in 30 secs...
and it was too easy in that once your mouse went over it, it turned into a hand.
you should make the pumpkin a simple movieclip and use the following code:

onMouseDown = function(){
if(pumpkin.hitTest(_xmouse, _ymouse){
//go to the next level
}
}

that way, the mouse won't turn into a hand, giving it away...
i like the graphics though.
cartoonish style.

you should've done more levels and submitted it on halloween.

blanblan responds:

Thanks for that little tip thing. :)

I'll be sure to fix it.

I submitted it a week or so earlier, what's the difference? xD

[bubblers-bubble game v1.1]

complex programming? uh...iono about that...

add some soft background music
make other kinds of bubbles you can pick up.
small ones...big ones...medium sized ones...
and not only can you just have a bubble that slows down time...
you could have one that's a temporary invincibility thing.
another that gives you another life...

tons of things.

you should have also made the fish do something too.
and maybe a time limit to show how much time till you get to the surface, or the next level where you would see a new kind of fish or bubble.

when i make stuff...i try to add tons of variety.

you'll notice the amount of weapons you can pick from in SS2...the obstacles in Tanks...

Spectacle responds:

I'll do the good stuff in my main games. This was just the first proper game I made. I made it ages ago. I can do alot now and I'll be submitting more soon.

[Viral (part 1)]

cool!

even though you're not an expert in graphics...this game makes obvious the time and effort you put into it...

it was fun! played it and was at the last level when i accidently pushed the stupid reload button...not your fault, anyways =p

what's with the scream you get from the green guy, anyways...?

Frozenverdugo responds:

Yeah I suck at graphics. No doubt about it I am bad at that and will never get better. Also the green guy is a woman, thats why.

[Love Dating Sim for Girls]

darn...i wish i could draw like that

i can make nice looking pictures...but animations and cartoons? no way.

only played it a tiny bit...cause i'm not a girl, but it looked awesome. hilarious in a realistic sort of way...

Bomee responds:

thank you :) there's a girl sara can woo so if you change your mind, hehe :)

[Destroy All Zombies]

...lol? this is just like my game

This is just like Space Skirmish II...except i have more weapons...a lot more...

not bad, anyways, i should add the dying sound.

but you should make it so you can go backwords...

TastyLamp responds:

Haven't played Space Skirmish II. I'll have to some time...
Dying sound was the only one I could find that was good enough, before I got bored and wanted to submit it. Lol.
Thats 4 requests for going backwards! I suppose it will be in the next release now.
Thanks for the review!

[Arcade Mode-Brodie Beater]

...

well, you can say he's 17, but i'm 13, and i've made Space Skirmish...

you should at least make "Brodie" move around and try to hide rather than slide back and forth waiting to die...

And also make some kind of splash on Brodie's face. So it actually looks like you're hitting him.

Plaid-Mime responds:

I know, I know, I was planning to. I was also planning to make the ninja stars stick into him and the blood from the knife stay there. But the "Brodie" movieclip wouldn't perform any more functions than it already was. (Like 5) and the "bullet hole" tutorials, none of them worked. Like I said, this is an intro to the characters. Brodie Beater 2 might come out soon, and it's Street Fighter style, just there's some glitches.

[BFD's Monster Arcade]

graphics

quite lacking in the graphics department.

perhaps some sound effects also?

BadFurDay responds:

Your review awfully lacks of details.

Which games lack of graphics? What exactly do you mean? Better backgrounds, better looking buttons, characters, effects?

And by sound effects, on which games would you want me to add some?

I'm getting reviews like that on every single game I make, and that's why Negrounds pisses me off.
Not only can't I submit the right filesize, but there is a strange music bug on NG that isn't anywhere alse, and I'm getting either some "LOL CLOCK CREW HATES U" reviews or some reviews like yours, which try to be constructive but are in fact totally useless.

[HitFight]

nice!

Sweet idea!
It's awesome. I can't really think of any ways to improve it.

If you email me the dimensions of the game...
I'll see if i can make a background pic for the menu or maybe even the game part too...

ZuiGe responds:

Thanks for the review! You're better in game making than I. Your game is so much cooler than mine!
Oh yeah! That would be awesome! I'll do it right away!